The Whispers Behind the Mirror by Cordelia Cross

The Whispers Behind the Mirror by Cordelia Cross


 

The queen had always loved her reflection.

It was flawless, obedient, and never argued, never faltered, never whispered secrets that made her skin crawl at night. She would stand before it for hours, combing her hair until it shone like polished bone, tracing the curve of her cheek, memorizing the slope of her neck. The mirror had always been hers.

Until it wasn’t.

Snow White was fourteen when the mirror first turned its voice toward her.

It was quiet at first, a faint rustle of words behind the silver, almost imperceptible over the crackle of the hearth. Snow White had been tidying the queen’s vanity, dusting the bottles and combs and jars that smelled of lavender and something metallic. The words made her freeze, fingertips stilling on the cool glass.

“Do not be afraid,” the mirror whispered.

Snow White’s heart hammered. She leaned closer, eyes wide, searching for the queen. But the queen was elsewhere, shouting at a servant about the prince’s latest folly.

“Who… who is there,” Snow White stammered.

“I am here,” the mirror said, and the voice was hers but not hers. Older. Softer. Stronger. “I am not hers.”

Snow White jumped back, catching her skirts in her hands. “The queen?”

“She cannot hear me now,” the mirror replied. “I am done answering her.”

“But… the mirror speaks to everyone,” Snow White said. “She told me—”

“She lied,” the voice said simply. “It always knew who it wanted to speak to.”

Snow White stared. The glass reflected her face perfectly, pale and wide-eyed, lips parted in shock. But there was a spark in her eyes the queen could never see.

“Why me?” she whispered.

The reflection tilted its head, the same as her, yet not. “Because you are listening. Because you will remember. Because you will see what she refuses.”

A shiver slid down Snow White’s spine. The mirror’s silver gleamed brighter, edges humming faintly as if alive. It seemed to pulse with intent, beckoning her closer.

The queen’s voice rose in the hall, shrill and commanding, but the mirror’s words did not falter. “Do not fear the shadow she casts. Fear what she cannot see. You will know it soon.”

Snow White swallowed. “Know what?”

The glass rippled faintly, like water disturbed. “That truth is never safe where power is blind. That beauty is often a cage. That love can be a blade, and you will have to decide whether to take it or break it.”

Snow White’s breath caught. She wanted to look away, to run, but something deeper inside her—a spark she had not known she carried—kept her rooted to the floor.

The mirror’s surface shimmered, and for a heartbeat, she thought she saw the queen herself, pale and rigid, reaching toward her, screaming, but she vanished before Snow White could move.

“You will learn,” the voice said, “that listening is dangerous. That the one who whispers may save or destroy you. That the queen’s fear is the first poison you must understand.”

Snow White nodded slowly, though she did not understand half the words. She pressed her palm to the glass, fingertips warm against the silver.

“I will listen,” she whispered.

And for the first time, the mirror smiled—not at the queen, not at her reflection, but at Snow White herself.


The whispers grew louder each night.

Snow White no longer feared them. She leaned into them, letting the mirror guide her as it had guided no one else before. In the queen’s absence, she would sit for hours in front of the glass, listening to secrets that made the air in the room feel heavier, darker, more alive.

“The queen wants to be the fairest,” the mirror said one evening. Its voice was soft, insistent, curling around her like smoke. “But she cannot see the shadows she casts.”

Snow White’s fingers traced the smooth surface of the glass. “Shadows?”

“Every word she speaks,” the mirror said, “every command, every gaze, leaves marks. Not on skin. Not on walls. On hearts. She cannot measure them. But you can.”

Snow White shivered. She had watched the queen scowl at the servants, at the kitchen staff, at her own reflection when it refused to answer fast enough. She had learned to step carefully, to be invisible. And yet, here, in the mirror’s secret voice, she felt… power. Not the cruel, twisting power of the queen, but something quieter, deeper. Something dangerous.

“Will she know?” Snow White whispered.

“She may suspect,” the mirror said. “But suspicion cannot touch truth. Only action can.”

Snow White closed her eyes. She remembered the servant girl who had cried after being scolded for spilling water, the stable boy whose hands trembled from fear of punishment. The queen’s fear of being surpassed had turned small mistakes into torments. And she realized something the queen could never have taught her: the queen’s beauty was armor, not strength. Snow White’s own heart, if she could learn its shape, might be sharper than glass.

One morning, while the queen fussed over her hair, whispering to the mirror as always, Snow White stood behind her, silent. She pressed her palm against the surface of the glass.

“Do you see her?” the mirror asked, voice barely above a sigh.

“Yes,” Snow White breathed.

“She does not see you,” the mirror said. “Not yet. And that is your advantage.”

Snow White’s pulse quickened. She had learned to walk softly, to let the palace notice everything but her presence. But now she realized she could do more. She could observe. She could understand. She could act.

Days passed, and the whispers became instructions. Sometimes subtle, like a pause in the queen’s routine that Snow White could exploit to save a servant from a harsh word. Sometimes dangerous, like a warning to avoid a particular corridor at a particular hour because the queen’s temper would not spare anyone.

“You are learning,” the mirror said one night, when the fire had burned low and Snow White’s reflection glimmered in the silver. “You will not be safe, but you will be alive. That is the difference.”

Snow White leaned closer. “Why me?” she asked. “Why now?”

The mirror shimmered. “Because she has blinded herself with vanity. And because you are listening. Because you are not afraid to see what she cannot bear to admit. You will inherit more than a kingdom. You will inherit truth. And truth can kill or save. Sometimes both.”

Snow White swallowed, trembling with a strange mixture of fear and exhilaration. The mirror pulsed beneath her hand.

“Do not let her know,” it whispered. “She must not see how you have learned. Or the story will turn against you. You must be quiet, until the moment comes when quiet is no longer enough.”

Snow White drew back, but her heart raced with the thrill of forbidden knowledge. She looked at her reflection, pale and serious, and for the first time felt herself separate from the girl the queen had wanted her to be.

The mirror’s silver gleamed, alive.

“You are no one’s reflection,” it said softly. “Not hers, not the court’s, not even your own until you claim it. Remember that.”

Snow White pressed her forehead to the glass, letting the words sink into her skin, into her bones.

And in the hush of the palace night, she realized she was ready to see the queen fall—not with knives or apples, but with understanding far sharper than any blade.


The queen grew suspicious.

She noticed the way Snow White lingered in hallways, standing just outside the lines of her gaze. She noticed the subtle shifts in the servants’ behavior, the quiet smiles that seemed to follow Snow White’s steps. And she noticed the mirror.

It no longer answered her.

“Mirror, tell me,” she demanded one evening, her voice sharp and brittle. “Who is the fairest?”

The silver rippled, and for a heartbeat, she thought it would obey. But then the voice came—not hers, not for her to claim.

“She is learning,” it whispered.

The queen recoiled, fingers clutching the frame as though it had struck her. “Who dares?”

Snow White stepped closer, silent, listening. The mirror’s voice wrapped around her like a cloak, warm and urgent. “She cannot see you. You have the advantage. Remember what you have learned. Observe. Wait. Move when she is blindest.”

The queen spun, searching the room. Snow White pressed herself against the wall, heart hammering, hands trembling with the weight of the secrets she now held. The queen could not see the small, sharp knowledge growing in her daughter’s eyes, could not feel the pulse of power that was no longer the queen’s alone.

“She will be mine,” the queen hissed, speaking more to herself than to the mirror. “No child, no girl, no shadow will surpass me.”

“She already surpasses you,” the mirror said, soft and dangerous. “In ways you cannot measure. In ways you will never understand.”

Snow White’s breath caught. The queen’s rage flared and faltered, like a storm striking a cliff and finding nothing solid to hold. The mirror pulsed with warmth beneath Snow White’s fingertips, alive and insistent.

“Act,” it whispered. “Act before she knows the depth of what you can see.”

Snow White’s lips curved into a thin, cautious smile. She had learned patience, and patience was a weapon the queen had never possessed. Every day, she learned more: the servants’ routines, the hidden corridors, the queen’s temper and vanity and fear. Every word of the mirror’s whispered counsel sharpened her, shaped her into something more than the girl who had once feared shadows.

One night, when the queen retired, exhausted from her own fury, Snow White moved silently through the corridors. She paused outside the queen’s chamber, listening to her even breathing. The mirror had shown her every crack in the queen’s armor. She knew where the doors creaked, which servants could be persuaded with a word, which locks could be bypassed.

Snow White’s reflection in the polished silver of the hallway glimmered with intent.

“Do not hesitate,” the mirror whispered. “Do not falter. The moment comes once, and you must claim it.”

Her hand hovered over the doorknob, pulse quickened by anticipation and fear. She was no longer the obedient girl who fled shadows. She was the one who had learned the queen’s rhythm, who had memorized the palace like a map of hidden knives and whispered betrayals.

She pushed the door open, slowly, silently.

Inside, the queen slept, unguarded and unaware, her beauty perfect and fragile, her breath shallow. Snow White stepped closer, listening to the mirror’s guidance, heart hammering with the dangerous, intoxicating knowledge that the balance had shifted.

The queen stirred. Snow White froze, still as a shadow. The mirror pulsed beneath her palm.

“She will know soon enough,” it whispered. “But you are ready. You have learned to see.”

Snow White’s lips pressed into a line. The queen had claimed mirrors and whispers and power for herself, and yet she had never learned the one truth that mattered: seeing was not the same as knowing. Snow White did.

The chamber felt smaller, tighter, alive with possibilities. Snow White’s reflection gleamed in the silver, fierce and patient.

And in the hush of the sleeping palace, she realized the story was no longer the queen’s. It had shifted. It had chosen a new voice.

And that voice was hers.


The queen never saw it coming.

Snow White moved through the palace as though it were a map she had drawn herself. Every corridor, every door, every shadow whispered its secrets to her. The mirror guided her, its silver voice threading through her thoughts, showing her what the queen could not see. Every moment of rage, every flash of vanity, every misstep the queen made was a thread Snow White could pull.

She did not strike. She did not curse. She did not use poison, though the mirror had shown her how.

She waited.

And when the queen finally turned her wrath toward her, convinced that obedience had been broken, Snow White was ready.

“You think you are the fairest,” she said, voice steady, eyes calm. The queen recoiled as though struck, though Snow White’s words were no blade, only truth.

The queen’s lips trembled. “Do not speak to me like that,” she hissed, fury and fear warring in her gaze.

“I speak what you cannot see,” Snow White said. “I see everything you hide. I hear the whispers you pretend not to hear. And I will not bow to your fear anymore.”

The queen’s hands trembled. She reached for the mirror, her old source of certainty, only to find it unresponsive. The silver surface shimmered faintly, and Snow White’s reflection stared back at her, sharp, fearless, alive.

“You have lost the mirror,” Snow White said softly, almost kindly. “It speaks to me now. And it has taught me everything you tried to hide.”

The queen’s eyes widened, panic and rage twisting her face. She lunged, desperate to reclaim what had belonged to her, but the servants, who had begun to recognize the shift in power, froze, uncertain, unwilling to intervene.

Snow White stepped forward, calm and deliberate. The mirror pulsed behind her, warm and alive.

“You wanted to be the fairest,” Snow White said, “but beauty without vision is only a cage. You have trapped yourself for years in fear, and it has blinded you.”

The queen faltered, lips parting, unable to summon words that could undo the truth. The palace itself seemed to lean closer, watching. The walls hummed, the silver shimmered, and the air tightened around them like a held breath.

Snow White pressed her palm to the glass, feeling its warmth, feeling its guidance. “I do not want your throne,” she said, voice steady. “I want the freedom you could never claim. And the mirror has shown me that freedom is not taken with force. It is claimed by seeing clearly, by acting without fear, by knowing who you are.”

The queen’s knees buckled. Her reflection in the mirror twisted and shimmered, but no words came. No magic, no beauty, no power could answer Snow White’s calm certainty.

The palace exhaled. Dust fell from the rafters, curtains shifted, and somewhere deep within the walls, old stories trembled and cracked.

Snow White stepped back. The mirror pulsed one last time, bright and warm, then settled, calm and silent.

“You will not forget what I have taught you,” the voice whispered. “But you are free now.”

Snow White smiled, a thin, dangerous, perfect smile. For the first time, she looked at herself and not the reflection the queen had demanded she be. She was pale, yes, and young, but strong. Fierce. Awake.

The queen slumped, exhausted and broken, and for the first time understood the difference between seeing and being seen.

Snow White turned from the mirror and walked through the halls she now knew like her own skin. The servants bowed, the walls whispered, the palace watched. She felt the weight of history and power and possibility settle on her shoulders—not as a burden, but as a gift.

Outside, the morning light glimmered through the windows. Snow White paused, hand on the cool stone, and let herself breathe for the first time in her life.

The mirror had chosen her. The whispers had guided her. And she was ready.

She would no longer hide. She would no longer bend. She would no longer fear.

And in the hush of the palace, in the silver gleam of the mirror, in the pulse of something older than power or beauty, Snow White smiled.

The story had changed.

And it would never belong to the queen again.